Comments on: naviarhaiku556 – heaven and earth https://www.naviarrecords.com/naviarhaiku556-heaven-and-earth/?utm_source=rss&utm_medium=rss&utm_campaign=naviarhaiku556-heaven-and-earth Experimenting with words and sounds Thu, 19 Dec 2024 10:51:06 +0000 hourly 1 By: Mats Undén https://www.naviarrecords.com/naviarhaiku556-heaven-and-earth/#comment-34750 Thu, 05 Sep 2024 00:06:57 +0000 https://www.naviarrecords.com/?p=14858#comment-34750 Yes, that is true. Maybe it is…?

]]> By: admin https://www.naviarrecords.com/naviarhaiku556-heaven-and-earth/#comment-34748 Tue, 03 Sep 2024 12:26:04 +0000 https://www.naviarrecords.com/?p=14858#comment-34748 In reply to Mats Undén.

Unfortunately I don’t know where to find the original version. I quite like the juxtaposition ‘rent asunder’ creates though. As if the early morning mist blending earth and sky was the natural order of things.

]]> By: Mats Undén https://www.naviarrecords.com/naviarhaiku556-heaven-and-earth/#comment-34747 Tue, 03 Sep 2024 03:57:57 +0000 https://www.naviarrecords.com/?p=14858#comment-34747 ‘rent asunder’ – Quite a brutal way of describing a quietly dissolving misty dawn. I wonder what words were used in the original Japanese version?

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