https://www.naviarrecords.com/naviarhaiku302-bursts-from-our-guns/?utm_source=rss&utm_medium=rss&utm_campaign=naviarhaiku302-bursts-from-our-guns Experimenting with words and sounds Tue, 04 Mar 2025 09:22:13 +0000 hourly 1 https://www.naviarrecords.com/naviarhaiku302-bursts-from-our-guns/#comment-23275 Fri, 18 Oct 2019 05:14:52 +0000 https://www.naviarrecords.com/?p=8725#comment-23275 A very surprising context for haiku.
I found the original french version and, strangely, the english translation is changing the meaning.
It should literally be :
“bursts from our guns
of a town on the horizon
light a brief vision”
or
“bursts from our guns
briefly light on the horizon
the vision of a town”
.. but i guess there is some good reason for such a difference.

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